Thursday 13 December 2012

Front cover - version one


4 comments:

  1. I like the colour scheme you have chosen for your front cover, it suits your genre and target audience well. I can see that this is a work in progress, but if I were to suggest any improvements I would say that you should add more variety of colour to the coverlines including more boxes around text as I think this looks great on your main coverline. A website would also be helpful to add somewhere near the barcode. Looking great though!

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  2. i really love the font you've used, but i think you need more cover lines as there is a lot of blank space

    you could also try adding a cover line to the right side of the magazine to see how this looks

    i think you main image is great though and very engaging, good job xx

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  3. Love the colour scheme and main image you've used! I think you could make your cover lines a lot smaller and then add more, it won't look busy just more realistic. I also think you should make your main cover line larger so it is the main point of focus. The font used makes the magazine look very professional, and I love the masthead! xxx

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  4. i really like this cover so far. I can see that you've followed your magazine inspiration and kept yours looking realistic and professional through your chosen font and muted colour scheme
    you could consider adding a selling line, as this is something your magazine is missing
    other than that, just more cover lines and a bit more variation in their style and this is gonna look great

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