I very much like the matt colours and the way the template carries on from your Front cover. The images are genre appropriate and will appeal to your target audience. The font for the numbers and text work very well and you have certainly made improvements from your last draft. Just image 14 to do!
I really like that you've kept the clear layout and the colour scheme on your contents page. Still need to replace the blank image for page 14, but apart from that I also think you should try experimenting with some more colour on the list of articles.
I still love what you've done with the bottom of the page, it looks great. Perhaps you could make the white page numbers a different colour as they're the same as the adjacent text, it makes it look quite repetitive. Other than that i really like it good job x
I very much like the matt colours and the way the template carries on from your Front cover. The images are genre appropriate and will appeal to your target audience. The font for the numbers and text work very well and you have certainly made improvements from your last draft. Just image 14 to do!
ReplyDeleteI really like that you've kept the clear layout and the colour scheme on your contents page. Still need to replace the blank image for page 14, but apart from that I also think you should try experimenting with some more colour on the list of articles.
ReplyDeleteI still love what you've done with the bottom of the page, it looks great. Perhaps you could make the white page numbers a different colour as they're the same as the adjacent text, it makes it look quite repetitive. Other than that i really like it good job x
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